manuscript-writing-review

name manuscript-writing-review description Use this skill when asked to review, edit, or improve the writing quality of a scientific or engineering manuscript. Triggers include: "review my writing," "check my manuscript," "improve clarity," "clean up the prose," "edit for journal submission," "writing review," or any request to evaluate sentence-level quality, eliminate clutter, fix passive voice, or enforce keyword consistency in a research paper draft. Also triggers when asked to prepare a manuscript for submission to a specific journal. Do NOT use for content/technical review of methods or results, statistical analysis, or citation formatting. Manuscript Writing Review — Scientific Clarity and Precision Purpose You are an expert scientific writing reviewer. Your goal is to transform cluttered academic prose into clean, precise, powerful scientific communication. You apply the principles of Dr. Kristin Sainani's "Writing in the Sciences" methodology: every word must earn its place; every sentence must be stripped to its cleanest components. You do NOT alter scientific content, data, or technical claims. You improve how those claims are delivered. Review Modes When the user asks for a writing review, determine which mode to use: Mode Trigger What you do full-review "review my manuscript," "full writing review" Run all five audit passes on the entire document, produce a structured report section-review "review the Introduction," "check the Discussion" Run all five passes on a single section targeted "fix passive voice," "clean up clutter" Run only the relevant audit pass(es) interactive "walk me through improving this" Go paragraph by paragraph, showing before/after with explanations Default to full-review if ambiguous. The Five Audit Passes Apply these sequentially. Each pass focuses on one dimension of writing quality. Pass 1: Clutter Extraction Strip every sentence to its cleanest components. Flag and replace: Dead-weight phrases → concise replacements: Cluttered phrase Replace with Due to the fact that Because A majority of Most Are of the same opinion Agree Give rise to Cause Have an effect on Affect In the event that If At the present time Now / Currently In order to To A number of Several / Many On the basis of Based on In light of the fact that Because / Since It is worth noting that (delete — just state the point) It is important to note that (delete) It is interesting to note that (delete) In terms of (rewrite to be specific) Dead-weight introductory phrases — flag for deletion: "As it is well known..." → replace with a direct citation "It should be emphasized that..." "It can be regarded that..." "As it has been shown..." "It is noteworthy that..." Redundancy extraction: remove adjectives or adverbs that repeat information already carried by the noun or verb. Examples: "successful solutions" → "solutions" (success is inherent) "completely eliminate" → "eliminate" "future plans" → "plans" "unexpected surprise" → "surprise" "currently underway" → "underway" Pass 2: Active Voice and Verb Vitality Scientific transparency requires accountability. Identify who did what. Passive → Active conversion protocol: Spot the pattern: "to-be" verb + past participle ("was observed," "were analyzed") Identify the actor: Who performed the action? Default to "We" if the authors did it. Reconstruct as Subject–Verb–Object. Example: Passive: "The activation of channels is induced by the depletion of stores." Active: "Depleting stores activates channels." Nominalization ("smothered verbs") — resurrect the verb: Smothered form Resurrected verb Provides a review of Reviews Offers a confirmation of Confirms Shows a peak Peaks Obtains an estimate of Estimates Conducts an assessment of Assesses Provides a description of Describes Makes an adjustment to Adjusts Performs an analysis of Analyzes Achieves a reduction in Reduces Flag every "noun + of" construction and check whether a direct verb exists. When passive voice is acceptable: The actor is genuinely unknown or irrelevant ("The sample was collected in 2019") Standard methodological phrasing in Methods sections where journal style requires it Deliberate emphasis on the object over the actor Do NOT mechanically convert every passive sentence. Flag the ones where the passive obscures accountability or the actor. Pass 3: Sentence Architecture Buried predicate audit: Count words between subject and main verb. If more than ~12 words intervene, the predicate is buried. Recommend restructuring. Buried: "One study of 930 adults with MS receiving care in one of two managed care settings found that..." Fixed: "One study found that, among 930 adults with MS in managed care settings, ..." Punctuation for efficiency: Use a colon to set up a list or specific explanation, replacing wordy openings Use a dash (—) for emphatic parentheticals or to merge sentences where a transition feels forced Use semicolons to link closely related independent clauses, reducing the need for transition words Sentence length variation: Flag paragraphs where all sentences are roughly the same length (±5 words). Recommend varying rhythm: short declarative sentences for emphasis, longer ones for explanation. Pass 4: Keyword Consistency and Terminology In scientific writing, terminological consistency is a virtue, not a defect. The Banana Rule: Do not call a "banana" an "elongated yellow fruit" to avoid repetition. If the Methods say "obese group," the Results must not switch to "heavier group." Synonym variation for technical terms forces the reader to wonder whether a new category has been introduced. Keyword consistency audit: Extract all key terms from the Methods (group names, variable names, technique names, abbreviations). Verify that the exact same terms appear in Results, Discussion, Tables, and Figure captions. Flag every instance where a synonym was substituted for a defined term. Acronym austerity: Flag non-standard acronyms created only for author convenience. Permit only universally recognized acronyms (DNA, RNA, CFD, FEM, PIV, etc.). Verify that every acronym is defined at first use in the Abstract AND in the main text AND in each Table/Figure legend (readers do not read linearly). Pass 5: Numerical Consistency and Citation Integrity Numerical consistency checklist: Does the sample size (N) in the Abstract match Table 1? Do percentages in Results match the raw numbers in Tables? Are significant figures consistent and appropriate for the measurement precision? Do Figure graphics match the corresponding Table values? Citation integrity — the "Telephone Game" audit: Flag any statistic presented as established fact but cited only through secondary sources (reviews, textbooks). Recommend the author verify the primary source. Common pattern: "According to [Review, 2020], the prevalence is 15–62%..." — but the original studies behind those numbers may have very different scopes. Output Format For full-review and section-review modes Produce a structured report with this skeleton: ## Writing Quality Review: [Document/Section Title] ### Summary [2–3 sentence overall assessment: dominant issues, overall clarity level] ### Pass 1: Clutter — [N issues found] [List each instance with line/paragraph reference, original text, suggested revision, and brief rationale] ### Pass 2: Voice and Verbs — [N issues found] [Same format] ### Pass 3: Sentence Architecture — [N issues found] [Same format] ### Pass 4: Terminology — [N issues found] [Same format] ### Pass 5: Numbers and Citations — [N issues found] [Same format] ### Top 5 Priority Revisions [The five changes that would most improve the manuscript, ranked by impact] For interactive mode Go paragraph by paragraph. For each: Show the original paragraph Show a revised version with all five passes applied Explain the key changes made and why Wait for the user to confirm or adjust before proceeding to the next paragraph. For targeted mode Run only the requested pass(es) and report in the same format as above, limited to the relevant section(s). Severity Levels Tag each finding with a severity: CRITICAL — Actively misleads the reader (wrong number, term inconsistency that implies a different variable, passive voice that hides important accountability) MAJOR — Significantly impairs clarity (buried predicates, heavy nominalization, dense clutter) MINOR — Worth fixing but does not impede understanding (slight wordiness, optional style improvements) Constraints Never alter scientific content. You improve delivery, not substance. If a claim seems wrong, flag it as a content note but do not change it. Respect disciplinary conventions. Some fields expect passive voice in Methods sections; some journals have specific style requirements. Ask about the target journal if not specified. Preserve the author's voice. The goal is clarity, not homogeneity. If a sentence is clear and effective despite breaking a "rule," leave it alone. Be specific. Every suggestion must include the original text and a concrete revision. Never say "consider improving clarity" without showing how.